Score: 6

"hmmm..."

submission: Alexis Hentai

date: April 23, 2009

well, i'm not into henti at all, so it was interesting reviewing this, but you asked me to, so i figured i guess i would.

i didn't get why you had different cards facing different directions going around before the actual content, but i suppose you had a reason for it. the pics were alright i guess, as i said, not something i'm into, but that's just me. i thought you took a little too long on each pic, especially the cards, which i'm sure no one really is interested in viewing, but again, that may just be me.

could really use some interactivity, maybe buttons to switch between the pics, or some sort of game to reveal the pics, and if you try to cheat you get the cards instead? odd submission all around, but as i said, not something i'd normally review or watch. good for a first submission, most people can't resist the stick figure crap on their first submission, glad to see someone did. pm me if you want help making it into a game or anything, i'd be glad to help.

overall, odd, and nothing amazing to be sure, but it looks like you put effort into it, and apparently there's a market for this sort of thing, so that earns you quite a few points.

Score: 10

"true in a funny way."

submission: : Drugs In Your Head :

date: April 22, 2009

actually rather insightful, i really liked it. you make a valid point about the medicinal weed people, that makes a lot of sense.

as does the part about people being hypocritical about what they're doing. me having addictions doesn't mean it's okay for you to have them too.

i doubt you'll respond, but i wanted to ask. would you be okay with drug use if people don't effect others with it? it seems like you would, but i'm not sure.

and for a bit of a flash review. i actually liked your animation quite a lot, particularly where foamy sticks his hands out over the edge of the screen. nice visual humor there. all in all, great cartoon, keep up the good work man.

Score: 7

"good idea"

submission: Flash Synthesizer

date: April 19, 2009

i like the idea, and what presentation there was is decent, however, there is a lot to be desired. you need to add something other than just one piano key area to make sounds w/, and the guitar should have a totally different interface altogether. you need drums, a bass guitar, and more instruments as well. it seemed like a quick flash, but adding these things could get you a ten. also, some of the sound quality (the bells) was rather low. the art is alright, but could be better. and you need a way to be able to play more than one sound and more than one instrument at once, and make it into a full synth.

so, overall, good job, but there is so much untapped potential in this flash, i really want to see you flesh it out a lot more. hope i helped, and good luck. 4/5 7/10

Score: 9

"this is the best."

submission: Breaking Influence EP (A->N)

date: July 30, 2009

i think this song is your best yet. i never actually got around to writing a review for it yet though. the start is well done and enjoyable. when it slows down it loses a little something, however. at times i wasn't sure if the song had changed somehow, as things keep going into other beats. all the beats are very well done and pro-sounding. for some reason the voice seems a little standard for techno. a great song however, and the best from you guys in the voiced song department. i realize i spent a little more time on the weaknesses than the strengths, but that's because we all expected the good ;). keep up the great work guys!

Score: 10

"interesting"

submission: From the Foreshadows (A->N)

date: April 25, 2009

this seems a little different from most of your stuff, but in a really good way. it's very refreshing and i like how the voices cut in and out a lot, it reminded me of innerpartysystem's cover of transmission. i liked the instrumental part around 2:00, and it switched back into the regular beat quite nicley. it got a tad repetitive at points, but it was a good beat so i liked it. it's really nice to hear from you guys again, this isn't my fav song by you guys, but it's close, keep up the good work ;P

Score: 6

"short but"

submission: Haunted -- Mix

date: April 23, 2009

besides the fact that it's nothing i'd listen to, it was alright for an ambiance idea. really needed something more to it though, but it's a decent start. sounds best near the end, which seems to be normal for you. way too short.