TheSongSalad's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sim Rpg Tutorial]

decent

just a tip on some of you code, you're very repetitive with things you don't need. like the factory, you could have written this:

on(release){
if(health>=25 && str>=15){
cash += 25;
time -= 25;
}
}

i don't know if those are your exact var's/ values, but just a little tip. i hope you work on it more and make it better. good luck!

[Perfect 10]

haha

i felt like i was house or something. good game, and i hope it gets a daily. good job man, and keep it up.

willcheng responds:

Thank you. Brilliant review - we appreciate you taking the time to comment.

[2112-Coop Chapter3]

sweet game man!

great game, odd with the japanese, but a really good game. i appriciate the subtitles. if this doesn't get front page, i have no idea what will. good luck man!

[Pixel Wars V0.75]

good idea

i like the idea of your game, but the flash itself needs some improvment. keep it up though!

[NG 1337 Translator!]

its okay

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[Killego]

wow...

wow. just wow. this is absolutely great. i like just about everything, minus the selective choices for where you can shoot, and the lack of controls in the instructions. i also get the technical limitations of using live footage, so i won't complain about not being able to control your char. like i'm sure everyone else will. great, great game. front page material man. 5/5, 10/10, n/n, q/q, 1002931/1002931, fav'd. what ever you want.

xLite responds:

Thanks. I am glad you understand. Although the next game I might actually try out new techniques to provide more choice and overall gameplay.

:D

[Simple Ball Game]

keep it up

good start, not bad. some issues. remove right click option, make the enemies move, and make the char. move faster, add sound. pm me if you need any help.

[Graphics Are Everything]

great

loads of fun, and the physics are fenominal. humor in the title, and a lot of fun to play. keep making them! favd.

[Globetrotter XL]

great

i love it. great idea, good animation (what you need of it) and a lot of fun. i did pretty good, but there was no way to be sure to get very close. the best i could do was click on Jamaica, and the city displayed was the one i was born in, so i know where it is! great job though. maybe a U.S. or other countries only version?

[Code Monkey Tycoon]

great idea and graphics

truly a great idea, reminded me of GameBiz. however, my issues were that time is constantly flowing, so you have no time to think and make a strategy. that you could not name your game. that you could not pick what to research, and that the interface is a little clunky. very professional game, but it needs some work to be truly great. 5/5 8/10.

thomas-devon responds:

Thank you for your constructive review.
We are currently working on version 2 of the game, and will definitely take your suggestions into account. Thanks for sharing them.