I like it
I like the art style in particular. The way the guy at the end was drawn was fantastic, and what animation there was was nicely done. I would complain that the flash was too short, but there doesn't seem to be much that could be added to it.
That being said, I don't think I can give it much higher than an 8 when the flash is this short. I really think you should flesh your next project out a lot more, keep it up though man!